On Friday, I had to give a 90 minute interactive demonstration to my fellow OWPers. It's one of the requirements of the class and it was so much fun! I centered my presentation around writing narratives/memoirs. I have found that, in the past, my students struggle to write a story about a time in their lives without explaining more than necessary. This year, I attempted to have them zoom in on a specific part of a story they wanted to tell. I had great results with it and the kids enjoyed all of the different writing they got to do. I used three mentor texts to help guide my instruction.
|Looking Back by Lois Lowry|
|Marshfield Dreams by Ralph Fletcher|
|Knucklehead by Jon Scieszka|
|Grandpa Green by Lane Smith|
|Wilfrid Gordon McDonald Partridge by Mem Fox|
After we have done a two weeks of idea generation for various memories, we choose one or two that we think we can make a decent story out of. We talk about the elements of story and what we think our stories should or should not include. Once the decision about which piece to work on, I have the kids draw a circle and divide it into six slices (like a pizza). In each slice, they have to chronologically place an event in their story. Here's what mine looked like:
My food memory was of traveling to Japan to visit my sister-in-law and all of the interesting food options we encountered there. After I modeled this, my class did they same thing with their memories. When our "pizzas" were filled in, we each chose ONE slice that we zoomed in on for a longer piece. I chose slice #2, eating a breakfast of rice with fish flakes. Ugh. Again, here's what mine looked like (I wrote in front of the class so they could see how it looks to struggle with getting your ideas onto paper).
I copied this into my writer's notebook, added more to it. The kids did the same with their own writing. Once we had a good handle on the story, I modeled some revision techniques (always a hard thing to get young writers to do--that's why teachers have to model, model, model). My notebook was full of crossed out lines and carrots indicating new lines that needed to be added in.
Unfortunately, our time ran out because we did this at the end of the school year. My classes had really great starts of memoirs. I plan on doing this FIRST this coming school year. It was such an engaging unit and our kids have SO MUCH to SAY!
How do you incorporate narrative into your school year? Leave a comment below.